#FridayFictioneers ‘Watch Me’ #FlashFiction #100Words

I’m thrilled it’s Friday once again. Time for a new flash fiction episode for Friday Fictioneers featuring Alice, her best friend, Bill, and her parents Marsha and Kevin.

Kevin has been in serious trouble for the last three weeks, and now he’s missing…

Thank you Rochelle at Rochelle Wisoff-Fields-Addicted to Purple for this week’s prompt for hosting this fabulous weekly flash fiction challenge. Thank you  J Hardy Carroll for this week’s photo prompt, below.

Watch Me

My mother’s voice trembled. “Promise me you’ll respect your father’s wishes, Alice.”

“Of course, mum,” I replied, kissing her cheek and heading out to my father’s car.

I wasn’t surprised to see Bill, leaning against the bumper. He hopped into the passenger seat and I drove to my destination.

“Don’t go inside, Alice.”

“You’re my boyfriend not my boss.”

He placed his hands on my shoulders. “I’m the person who’ll always put your well-being first.”

“He’d never leave us.”

“His note said, ‘Don’t look for me,” Bill said standing in front of the building.

I pushed past him. “Watch me.”


All my ‘Alice’ flash fiction stories, written for the Friday Fictioneers Challenge, can be read as standalones, but if you’d like to read previous stories of Alice’s adventures, here  they are!

Published by LucciaGray

Writer, blogger, teacher, reader and lover of words wherever they are. Author of The Eyre Hall Trilogy, the breathtaking sequel to Jane Eyre. Luccia lives in sunny Spain, but her heart's in Victorian London.

22 thoughts on “#FridayFictioneers ‘Watch Me’ #FlashFiction #100Words

  1. I read through your Alice series….Commendable…to link all the prompt to a girl’s life with thrill, action, romance, grief….. You have done a very good job. And it is fun to read through all of them together, feels like different chapters of a novel…
    Any plans of sewing it up into a full fledged story? Or its already doe i am unaware?
    Kepp writing 🙂

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