It’s Friday, time for another Friday Fictioneers Flash Fiction story.
Kevin has been behaving strangely since he was kidnapped and rescued by Alice and Billy.
Last week, Alice and her mother caught Kevin on a date with another woman. This week he has some explaining to do…
Thanks to Rochelle Wisoff-Fields for hosting the challenge, and Yarnspinnerr for today’s photo prompt, which led me directly to this weeks’ 100-word story.
PHOTO PROMPT © Yarnspinnerr
Clara
“I’m listening, dad. Explain.”
“Alice, this is Clara. We met many years ago, before you were born.”
Alice folded her arms over her chest and stared at her father, ignoring the stylish woman by his side.
“I was in Mexico, with my mother, looking for my father.”
“Nice try. Did you forget your father died when you were a baby?”
“The truth is he left us and returned to his native Mexico.”
Alice shivered. “Mexico?”
“He had another family there.”
Alice’s arms fell to her side. “What?”
“Clara is your aunt, my stepsister.”
Alice’s head spun.
“Clara needs our help, Alice.”
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All my ‘Alice’ flash fiction written for the Friday Fictioneers Challenge can be read as standalones, but if you’re interested in reading previous stories of Alice’s adventures, here they are!
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Awesome! Love that turn-around.
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Thank you! Kevin’s got out of one problem recently, but he’s getting into another mess now….
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haha
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That’s a turn up for the books after all the previous stories. Quite a twist!
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He’s not as bad as he would seem. Remember I’m a romance writer (usually!).
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I feel so much better knowing Kevin was not being a bad man… 😉
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Thanks, so do I! There’s more to him than meets the eye;)
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This is my first read of one of your ‘Alice’ stories and I loved it.
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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Welcome and Thank you for dropping by and commenting. Alice started as a creative child and now she’s an assertive young woman. Although I do skip around sometimes (I blame it on the prompts!) I try hard to make them all standalone, so it shouldn’t matter if you haven’t read previous stories.
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Ah, a step sister, that was unexpected. Good for Kevin. The plot thickens.
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Alice takes all in her stride. Well crafted.
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Yes, she’s very smart! Thank you for your visit, comment and inspiring photo:)
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Dear Luccia,
I’m relieved that Kevin wasn’t having an affair. Quite the plot twist. Good job.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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So am I! Thank you, Rochelle❤
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Great story. Brilliant twist.
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Thank you, Lisa ❤
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Curiouser and curiouser….
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Practising some suspense writing!
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Very nice twist, so glad! =)
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Everyone’s glad Kevin has a real excuse!
I may add some suspense and twists and turns, but overall I’m a romance writer, hea 😂😂.
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Ohhh excellent–what a twist!
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Thank you!
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Well told and you’ve opened up a whole new branch to the story.
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Thanks! It’s all linked to Kevin’s mysterious disappearance…
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Oh, good twist 🙂 The plot definitely just grew thicker!
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Thank you❤
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