It’s my first time taking part in the Sunday Photo Fiction. I came across the picture which inspired me to write the following 100-word flash fiction, although according to the rules, you can write up to 200 words. Thank you Susan for hosting and Fandango for the photo prompt.
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The Nightmare
I watch his thoughtful face on my phone screen as I describe my nightmare.
“I’m walking along a narrow path lined with tall, sturdy trees, but there’s a bend ahead and I can’t see what lies beyond, so I slow down then stop, because I’m terrified. That’s how I feel, paralyzed. What does it mean?”
He smiles. “I’ll tell you what happens next. You keep walking until you’re standing by my side, and together we walk down the aisle towards the man you love.”
“Are you sure, dad?”
“Absolutely, my princess.” He sighed. “Your mother would be so proud.”
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Rereading Jane Eyre 
Soppy stuff, but nicely done, I’m blinking back the tears!
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She and her dad have a good relationship!
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Yes, I imagined the worried bride when I saw the photo, but until I started writing, I didn’t know who would help her to move past the bend… I’m glad it was her dad, mine tried to ruin my own wedding, 38 years ago:( wishful writing?
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Yikes. Sorry to hear about that. But, yes, we can rewrite our history and continue to rewrite until we’re happy…
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Looks soppy it is this season! Very well written story.
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Well, what can I say, I was in a romantic mood. I’ve been reading too many feel-good novels lately! I’ll soon be going back to psychological thrillers…
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Keep it coming! Love them Lucy
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Awww, that’s lovely. I’m pleased mine’s not the only soppy story this week!
Keith’s Ramblings is but a click away!
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Nicely done!
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Thank you, Tessa!
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I think that weddings, big ones anyway are mostly for the parents. At least mine was.
I wasn’t afraid – but I’m sure many are when they have an arranged marriage and the wedding day is the first time they meet their spouse! 🙂
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Fortunately, not everyone gets the wedding jitters, but it has been known to happen! I think you’re right about parents enjoying them most. I enjoyed my daughter’s wedding much more than mine!
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Getting married is a big decision. A bend we don’t know what lies beyond. Father reassured her beautifully.
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Thank you for reading and commenting:) Many young women would love to have supportive fathers like the one in my story. Unfortunately, it’s not always the case.
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A very sweet story. Glad her dad was there to encourage, especially since her mother was not. Those moments before marriage can be scary. Lovely piece of writing!
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Thank you, Brenda. They are indeed scary.
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Brilliant debut. Glad to have you join in.
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Thank you, Violet! Glad to join in your welcoming and inspiring challenge and group 🙂
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