It’s Friday, time for another Friday Fictioneers Flash Fiction story with adorable and creative Alice, her incredulous and conventional parents, Marsha and Kevin, and her best friend, Billy, whom we met last week. Today, we’ll be seeing where Alice lives (see photo below). I hope you like this new episode!
Thanks to Rochelle Wisoff-Fields for hosting the challenge and J Hardy Carroll for today’s photo prompt, which led me directly to this weeks’ 100-word story.
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Hide and Seek
Billy’s eyes narrowed. ‘You live there?’
Alice nodded and held her breath.
Billy shrugged, obviously unimpressed. ‘I’d better be going home.’
It was a hideous, old house, but Alice didn’t want to lose her new friend, so she decided to point out some advantages. ‘There’s an indoor pool, viewing room, and tons of video games!’
‘Bye, Alice,’ he said, walking away.
She had to stop him, so she told him her secret. ‘There are wizards, goblins, treasure maps and hiding places…’
Billy’s eyes beamed. ‘Really?’
Alice pushed the iron gates.
‘Race you to the door!’ he challenged. ‘Last one’s ‘it!’’
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I think Alice and Billy are going to have fun in that stunning mansion. More next week…
All my ‘Alice’ flash fiction written for the Friday Fictioneers Challenge can be read as standalones, but if you’re interested in reading previous stories of Alice’s adventures, here they are!
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Boy, Alice is quite the conniver. I see trouble ahead for Billy. 🙂
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😂 Perhaps she’s just lonely and wants to keep her new, special friend.
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That’s brave of him! I would run the other way if I heard of goblins and wizards!
I like the sense of adventure these kids have.
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Thank you for dropping by and commenting 🙂 Alice and Billy are going to have plenty of adventures over the next few months😀
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Dear Luccia,
Hopefully Billy will realize that Alice is a gem of a friend. Cute story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, Rochelle 💗 Lovely prompt. Alice found a friend last week, her house this week, I wonder where the prompt will take me next week?
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I see many adventures ahead for these two!
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Let’s hope Billy’s imagination is half as developed as Alice’s!
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Finally someone who appreciates her imagination! 🙂
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Such a cute story 🙂
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Thank you, Dahlia💗
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Good thing that Billy doesn’t need more than a little kick. Kids these days, no? The kids I knew (and I) would have loved to explore an old house like that. Very cute. Alice gets the knack of using her imagination at the right time.
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Thank you. They are certainly different to most kids these days!
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Nice take. Enjoyed this.
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Thank you.💗
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… and who wouldn’t want to live with a wizard?!
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Alice is a clever girl😂 she knows how to convince Billy 😀
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Hope she wasn’t lying. Great story.
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Thank you.💗 Well, she does have a vivid imagination, but we’ll see…
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She knows how to get her man. She’ll go far.
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Thank you.💗 Yes, she’s a clever girl!
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Nice blog post, thanks
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Thank you:)
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Awesome blogpost
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Thank you:)
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Sweet story and love alice and billy !
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Thank you! They visit my blog every Friday!
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Ill come back next week thank you for sharing them !
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