Stream Of Consciousness Saturday #SoCS: Vary your ‘Very’
Posted by LucciaGray
Vary Your ‘Very’ (Or Better Still Just Delete It!)
This is something I’ve written about before, but it’s a subject that gets me all worked up, so I’ll talk about it again.
I hate the word ‘very’.
‘But why?’ You may ask. ‘Very’ is a nice little word. It could be, if it appeared every now and again, but it becomes a crutch, or even worse, an annoying habit.
I hate coming up with ‘very’ continuously when I’m reading, and believe me, it usually is continuous. Writers either use it too much, or don’t use it.
The only words I hate more than very are ‘a bit’. The three make me cringe, painfully.
Fortunately, there are two solutions to the ‘very’ issue:
- Leave them out. Just scan your document for them and delete. Easy. Read your text again. See, I told you, there’s no difference, is there? Wrong. There is a difference, you’ve improved your text, immensely!
- Second option. Vary your ‘very’. Think of alternatives. Be creative. Change the words for another stronger adjective or a superlative, make the adjective into an adverb, use a complete clause, or metaphor, or even a simile, anything will be better than ‘very’.
Some examples for improving ‘very’:
‘very beautiful’ : stunning?
‘very silly’: idiotic? The silliest person I’ve ever met?
‘very far’: a long distance / too far to walk / from here to Land’s End?
‘very tired’: exhausted? Worn out? As if I had walked to Rome?
‘very slow’: slowly?
‘very cross’: furious? Mad enough to kill him?
Very clever: ingenious? Intelligent? Brilliant?
I said I hated every ‘very’, but there are two which are on the top of my list of detestable expressions.
The worst are ‘very good’ and ‘very bad’.
Let’s face it, your character is either bad, or wicked, or evil, or even a monster, but ‘very bad’, that’s so weak, it makes me want to cuddle him.
‘Very good’ irritates me no end. What do you mean ‘very good’? If it’s food, is it delicious? If it’s a job well done, is it excellent? Is it great? If it’s a character, is he adorable? Perhaps to die for?
I say ‘very good, one more time’, or ‘very good, try again’, to encourage my students when they do something badly! That’s absolutely true, all teachers know it’s true.
Come on, teachers never say ‘very bad’, do they? But when they say ‘very good’, it’s never enough. I’m almost certain that ‘very good’ isn’t anywhere near good for most people. If it really is good, use another word, don’t put ‘very’, or you’ll ruin it!
I feel mentally drained after this rant. I need to go for a run and let some steam off. I’ve written ‘very’ so many times, I couldn’t even try to get any work done, because I feel ‘very silly’.
Remember, don’t have a ‘very good’ weekend, have a wonderful weekend!
PS If I haven’t convinced you, perhaps Mark Twain will:
Substitute ‘damn’ every time you’re inclined to write ‘very;’ your editor will delete it and the writing will be just as it should b
This is a wonderful chart I’ve used in class.
PS I forgot to say that the only time ‘very’ would be acceptable is if it’s used in a dialogue, but be warned, I’m going to be very suspicious of the character’s intellect!
About LucciaGrayWriter, blogger, teacher, reader and lover of words wherever they are. Author of The Eyre Hall Trilogy, the breathtaking sequel to Jane Eyre. Luccia lives in sunny Spain, but her heart's in Victorian London.
Posted on April 25, 2015, in Stream of Consciousness Saturday and tagged Annoying words, Editing, Stream of Consciousness, Stream Of Consciousness Saturday, Tightening your prose, Very. Bookmark the permalink. 8 Comments.