#FridayFictioneers ‘Dancing Shoes’ #FlashFiction
It’s Friday, time for another Friday Fictioneers Flash Fiction story with adorable and creative Alice and her incredulous and conventional parents, Marsha and Kevin. Today they’ll be visiting her grandmother’s house, on a sad occasion, or is it?
Thanks to Rochelle Wisoff-Fields for hosting the challenge, and Magaly Guerrero for today’s photo prompt, which led me directly to this weeks’ 100-word story.
Alice rushed down the stairs and flew into the library.
‘Can we move here tomorrow?’ she asked her parents as she slipped on her grandmother’s black, laced shoes and danced around the room.
Kevin’s jaw dropped. ‘Marsha, what’s happening to our Alice?’ he asked his wife. ‘Your mother’s still at the funeral parlour. We haven’t even buried her yet!’
‘Granny wants us to move in at once. I have to look after all her books and manuscripts.’
‘When did she tell you that?’ asked Marsha.
‘Just now. She’s not ill any more. She’s better, that’s why she’s come back home.’
‘Just now. She’s not ill any more. She says she’s sorry, but she had to go.’
Which ending do you think is best?
I like them both, but I find the first a little disturbing, as if she’s going to remain as a ghost, albeit a ‘friendly’ ghost, while the second is more optimistic. she’s gone to a better place…
All my ‘Alice’ flash fiction written for the Friday Fictioneers Challenge can be read as standalones, but if you’re interested in reading previous stories of Alice’s adventures, here they are!
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