Posted by LucciaGray
This post was written in response to this weeks’ Three Line Thursday prompt. Three lines, 30 words maximum.
Picture by David
You told me once, ‘move on, never return.’ I obeyed
Til last night, when I dreamt I slipped back
Inside and you were still there, weathered yet waiting.
Posted on October 22, 2015, in Three Line Thursday and tagged Flash Fiction. Bookmark the permalink. 4 Comments.
Beautiful and so much meaning in so few words…
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Thanks, Olga! Flash fiction is a great incentive for language economy. Less can be more, but it’s so hard to restrain oneself with longer fiction!
Nicely done -and so wonderful with the photo.
Thanks. It’s an inspiring photo. Have a great day, Noelle.💖
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