This flash was written in response to Sacha Black’s challenge to write a 52-word flash based on her weekly prompt.
This week’s prompt is to write about a character who is terrified Isn’t it amazing what can be done with just 52 words? Why not join in?
A gush of chilled fog pushed open the sliding door.
The dark shadow morphed into a cloaked figure.
“You sent for me?” The voice was a hollow echo.
I shook my head fiercely.
He smiled, blood dripping from his fangs.
“Then who?” he asked looking around the compartment at the sleeping passengers.
Was that chilling enough for you?