#Writespiration #52Words in 52 Weeks @Sacha_Black ‘Who Called?’ #FlashFiction

This flash was written in response to Sacha Black’s challenge to write a 52-word flash based on her weekly prompt. 

This week’s prompt is to write about a character who is terrified Isn’t it amazing what can be done with just 52 words? Why not join in?

Who Called?

A gush of chilled fog pushed open the sliding door.

The dark shadow morphed into a cloaked figure.

You sent for me?” The voice was a hollow echo.

I shook my head fiercely.

He smiled, blood dripping from his fangs.

“Then who?” he asked looking around the compartment at the sleeping passengers.


Was that chilling enough for you?


Published by LucciaGray

Writer, blogger, teacher, reader and lover of words wherever they are. Author of The Eyre Hall Trilogy, the breathtaking sequel to Jane Eyre. Luccia lives in sunny Spain, but her heart's in Victorian London.

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