It’s Friday, time for another Friday Fictioneers Flash Fiction story featuring Alice Pendragon and her best friend Billy! This week they’re both taking part in a swimming competition.
Thanks to Rochelle Wisoff-Fields for hosting the challenge and to Terri Smeigh for this week’s photo prompt.
Photo Credit: Terri Smeigh
The Swimming Competition
The highest school team goal scorer wore a smug smile as he strolled over.
‘Hi Alice, fancy a pizza?’
I was one of the few girls he hadn’t hit on yet. ‘Sorry, I’m swimming.’
‘What about the Saturday market? Help me choose my sister’s birthday present.’
Jack is dense, but persistent. ‘I’m swimming.’
‘Everyone knows Billy will win.’
I nodded, Billy’s the best. ‘We’re training together.’
‘So, when he beats you, we can go on our date. What about a movie on Sunday?’
‘On Sunday I’ll be celebrating with Billy, his victories are mine too,’ I said and strode away.
My ‘Alice’ flash fiction written for the Friday Fictioneers Challenge can be mostly read as standalones, but if you’re interested in reading previous stories of Alice’s adventures, here they are!
By the way, I’m a couple of days late this week in posting my story and below are the three reasons! My lovely grandchildren!
This post was written in response to Charli Mills at Carrot Ranch’s weekly #99 word Flash Fiction Challenge. This week’s prompt is to include ‘a line’ in the story. Check out other entries or take part yourself!
Speed Dating Lines
“You’re a writer?”
She nodded, expecting him to make an excuse and move away, instead he asked, “Could you write me an original pick up line?”
“I’m not helping you lie.”
“Are you kidding?” He said waving his arm around the crowded venue. “Everyone’s expecting me to pretend.”
“You’re right. It’s so sad.” She stood, “I shouldn’t have come.”
“Wait, could I borrow your pen and notebook?”
She hesitated then pushed them towards him.
“I’m tired of pretending,” he wrote.
“Just be yourself,” she wrote back.
“Could we both be ourselves somewhere quieter?” he wrote.
She drew a smiley.
Unusual place for me, I know, but this is where Charli’s ‘lines’ brought me this week!
I’ve never been speed dating, having been (more or less!) happily married for over thirty years, but I’ve heard and read a lot about it, and I’m afraid many comments are negative. You all know by now that I’m an incurable romantic, so for this particular couple in my flash, it ended well, and might even be the start of something honest…
If you want to know more about speed dating, follow the link under the picture.
What’s your experience or thoughts on speed dating?