#Writephoto ‘Shattered Dreams’ #Tanka

LucciaGrayNovember 6, 2017#WritephotoDreams, Poem, Poetry, Tanka

This post was writen in response to Sue Vincent’s weekly #writephoto challenge

‘It’s not real,’ she said.

‘How do you know?’ he asked her.

‘Because a pebble

Could shatter your dreams into

ripples of disappointment.’

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Writer, blogger, teacher, reader and lover of words wherever they are. Author of The Eyre Hall Trilogy, the breathtaking sequel to Jane Eyre. Luccia lives in sunny Spain, but her heart's in Victorian London. View more posts

7 thoughts on “#Writephoto ‘Shattered Dreams’ #Tanka”

Sue Vincent says:

November 6, 2017 at 4:10 pm

Short and perfect 🙂

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1. LucciaGray says:
  
  November 6, 2017 at 5:51 pm
  
  Thank you, Sue♥️
  
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  1. Sue Vincent says:
    
    November 6, 2017 at 8:05 pm
    
    🙂
    
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Iain Kelly says:

November 6, 2017 at 5:05 pm

Downbeat, but true.

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1. LucciaGray says:
  
  November 6, 2017 at 5:53 pm
  
  Thanks Iain. I’m usually more optimistic, but this time the prompt made me shatter dreams with pebbles😂
  
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