This Tanka was written in response to Sue Vincent’s weekly photo prompt.
Autumn
Trees stare at river,
Watching rippling reflections.
River stares at sky,
Admiring its vast blue hue.
Leaf falls on grass, blade quivers.
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Hope you’re having a wonderful Sunday!
I love that lst line, Luccia.
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Thank you, Sue.
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I so love this! and I agree, the first line is captivating 🙂
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So nice – I love your approach and word choice! And the final line about the blade quivering – really great!
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Thank you💖
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Nature notices. We should too.
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This poem does capture the essence of calmness.
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Thank you, Robbie. A picture paints a hundred words, but a handful of words can also paint a beautiful
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