#Writephoto Autumn #Tanka

LucciaGrayNovember 11, 2018November 11, 2018#Writephoto, My Poems, TankaAutumn, Leaves, Nature, Sky, Tanka, Trees

This Tanka was written in response to Sue Vincent’s weekly photo prompt.

Autumn

Trees stare at river,

Watching rippling reflections.

River stares at sky,

Admiring its vast blue hue.

Leaf falls on grass, blade quivers.

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Writer, blogger, teacher, reader and lover of words wherever they are. Author of The Eyre Hall Trilogy, the breathtaking sequel to Jane Eyre. Luccia lives in sunny Spain, but her heart's in Victorian London. View more posts

9 thoughts on “#Writephoto Autumn #Tanka”

Sue Vincent says:

November 11, 2018 at 5:42 pm

I love that lst line, Luccia.

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1. LucciaGray says:
  
  November 11, 2018 at 9:56 pm
  
  Thank you, Sue.
  
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Covert Novelist says:

November 11, 2018 at 7:36 pm

I so love this! and I agree, the first line is captivating 🙂

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Book Club Mom says:

November 12, 2018 at 1:25 am

So nice – I love your approach and word choice! And the final line about the blade quivering – really great!

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1. LucciaGray says:
  
  November 12, 2018 at 10:16 am
  
  Thank you💖
  
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Norah says:

November 12, 2018 at 10:39 am

Nature notices. We should too.

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robbiesinspiration says:

November 12, 2018 at 5:24 pm

This poem does capture the essence of calmness.

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1. LucciaGray says:
  
  November 12, 2018 at 6:05 pm
  
  Thank you, Robbie. A picture paints a hundred words, but a handful of words can also paint a beautiful
  
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