Today’s just one of those days…
The Moon's hiding In night's black cave, The darkest hour, Seconds before You surrender, The moment when Hope has devoured Your weary dreams, Open your eyes, Look up to sky, The cloud has passed, The moon is always there, However dark the night. @LucciaGray
Being almost 62, I’ve had a few dark days and the advantages of having so much experience is that I have some strategies to overcome some of those bleak moments we all have, now and again, sometimes for a reason, but often for none at all.
Here’s what I do. I have my WAM, or water and music therapy, described in this post, where I remind myself that I’m invincible. Other times I give in to my melancholy and write a poem. I love writing poems, and it comes fairly easily, but a proper poem to show the world takes at least two hours, plus sometimes I just leave it to rest in my mind and come back later or another day to revise or finish.
5 Steps to writing a poem when you’re feeling blue.
This is what works for me. You need pen and paper or your journal, that’s it. Optional: music, favourite poems, films etc.
First I just freewrite, stream-of-consciousness style. I get it all off my chest, but I put a time and length limit (I don’t want to (over)wallow in my misery), of about ten minutes or one page in my notebook or sheet of paper. This is really helpful, because it helps me understand how I’m feeling. That in itself will make you feel much better, but let’s continue.
Secondly, I look at the words and expressions I’ve used. In this case I had darkest hour, dark night, no hope, pitch black, dark cave, loss, sentences such as ‘the darkest moment is just before dawn’ came to mind, etc. . On another, clean page, write the main words or short phrases, taken from what you’ve written, each on a separate line. At this point You can think of song lyrics and poems or even film or book titles that align with your feelings and add the lines or words, or any other words and short phrases which come to mind.
Thirdly. Congratulations, your poem is there, but now you have to give your words a rhythm. I like to work with syllables, which is why I love haikus 5-7-5 or tankas 5-7-5-7-7. It’s simple, and it works. Order your words into the syllables and lines. You should be able to come up with a few short poems. You don’t need to use all the words, you wrote, just a few to highlight your feelings, and you can add synonyms for rhyming purposes.
Fourthly, Great! We’re nearly there. I play around with syllables and sounds, this time I’m paying closer attention to the meaning or feelings I wish to transmit. Here I often change the syllables and rhythm to suit my words and feelings. Today’s poem above is not a haiku or tanka, it’s mostly four syllable lines, except the last two which have six syllables.
Finally, because fifthly sounds funny, you need a new sheet of paper and write out your rough version or versions, you may have more than one. You add the final touches and if you’re happy, type it out and show it to the world, and if it doesn’t sound quite right and your inspiration is in tatters, put it in a drawer and come back later to finish.
Whatever you’ve written, I bet you feel better already. I always do! And, of course, I don’t publish them all. Some never get properly polished, they’re just for me and my journal.
Do you write poems when you’re feeling blue?
All pictures from pixabay and all thoughts my own, although I’m sure someone has already expressed some of them.
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I love this:
“The moon is always there
However dark the night.”
Love your suggestions for writing poetry too. Thanks.
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Hi Norah! Thanks! It was originally ‘the sun will always rise…’, but that’s such a cliché, I thought I’d give it a spin towards the moon!
I’ve added the page in my morning journal where this poem came from after you read the post, as a second thought. It’s very personal, which is why I doubted before publishing, but I wanted to show how the process works for me, and anyway, I keep no secrets from my blog:)
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Shows the importance of turning those old clichés on their head.
Sure do…(and yes, it’s been one of those days).
Sorry to hear that, Willow. But you know what, although it’s a cliché, those days can be so productive for artists and writers if we immerse ourselves in our craft and put all that energy into creating something, like a poem, a short story, a future plan.
In the end, I had a fairly good day yesterday. I avoided brooding, wrote a poem and blog post, prepared another post, I even started an outline of a novella… Anything to stop dwelling on my own dark thoughts. I hope your day ended better than it started:)
Have a great Friday and weekend!